It's old-fashioned, I know, but another good trick for helping with rewrites is to write a first draft by hand. In this age of lap tops, iPads and other convenient mobile devices, sometimes we forget we can just carry a notepad and a pen around with us wherever we go. I wrote the first draft of my novel For a Speck of Gold completely in cursive on yellow notepads when I was working at an after school program back in the early 2000s. While the kids were doing their assignments, I jotted down my ideas. I have written a number of short stories this way while sitting in waiting rooms while my daughter was taking dance or swim lessons.
While this might seem like a waste of time to some - I mean, writing into the computer and saving it is so much easier - think of it as an exercise. I find that I don't write as much by hand as I do when typing, probably because my hand hurts after a while. So, when I go to copy what I've created into my computer, I do an automatic rewrite. I fill in the light paragraphs, fix the obvious mistakes, catch a lot of the repeating words. What this means is, the first draft to be on my computer is already a second draft.
Give it a try and see how it works for you.
D. G. Driver
Author of books for teens and tweens featuring diverse characters dealing with social or environmental issues, such as her ecofiction fantasy series The Juniper Sawfeather Trilogy and her award-winning novel about autism awareness No One Needed to Know.
Write and Rewrite Blog
“There are no bad stories, just ones that haven’t found their right words yet.” – D. G. Driver, award-winning author of Cry of the Sea, Whisper of the Woods, Echo of the Cliffs and No One Needed to Know.
A blog mostly about the process of revision with occasional guest posts, book reviews, and posts related to my books.